jJandy0208's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Systile - Deadly Trick]

Much louder kick. But much more attention. This is what it needs.

[Restart]

The build-up snare for FL basic snare sample? I mean you can make it work. But you need some more work. For example, you could accentuate the body of the snare with an eq and saturate it with waveshaper and layer it with some of the grv clap to get some nice snares. But the raw sample just didn't work with all the others.

Also all the growls sound too sudden and start to sound too repetitive at 3:00. Put some change. For example, change the wavetable or put some weird filters.

I mean, mixing and sound design wise, it is perfect. But I just think some more work can be put on this to be ten times better.

DoctorNoSense responds:

Thx, this is my second glitch hop / dubstep song. I'll try to make it better next time ^^

[League of Legends - Phoenix (DoctorNoSense Remix)]

The snare at the 2:30 just doesn't work. Maybe replacing it with some of the shortened and pitched up extra terra snares? Other than that, it is pure masterpiece.

DoctorNoSense responds:

Wow, thanks for all your feedback <3
I'll work on it ^^

[YuYoon & Systile - Mini Rocket]

More whitenoise and strength on the supersaw.
After that It should be a masterpiece.

[Systile - Jellyfish]

Nice.

Sounds funky.

[L. Mity - Thysia(Θυσία)]

You can feel what magic is like through this.

[Systile - Waterdrops]

Nice job. But the lead needs some reverb and some more stuff on the background such as some ambience sfx to fill up the space. The melody is Amazing.

[Systile - Resonance]

The chords need to be louder and fuller by a lot.
This needs sub.
And some sidechain.
But the melody is top notch.
Nice work!

[ReVerse - Uprising]

Needs some sidechain. The chord progression was very unique and the melodies were well made. At the build, putting low passed shord might make it more fuller. The piano needs some reverb. Other than that, It is amazing!

[30 Minutes (Dubstep)]

Nice vocal and piano and reverb at drumset. The drumset it self was amazing as well at the beginning. But at the drop, you need stronger bass such as FM bass. The snare there wasn`t bad tho. Just a better drop and I think it`ll be perfect. :)